I finished Chapter 11 a while back but I’ve been so busy with NaNo and Thanksgiving and work that I didn’t get a snippet posted. So, without further ado, I present A Bit of Chapter 11… This-a-way!
Category: The Lokana Chronicles
Zzzzz…
What a day! It’s been a rough couple of days for me, guys. Today I worked straight through my lunch hour and didn’t have a chance to do any writing till sometime after seven o’clock tonight. It was nuts! But hopefully things will settle down after tomorrow. In the meantime, I’ll be posting more snippets soon.
But now, bed. We have a date. I need all the Z’s.
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Pitch Wars!
Okay, I’m climbing down from the sad horse I rode in on last night to announce that I’ve entered Pitch Wars. See? Moving on I am!
What’s that? You don’t know what Pitch Wars is? Well, then head on over to Brenda Drake’s blog and read this post. Have no time to click through and read? Okay, okay, I’ll spell it out.
Staying positive
There’s a song that says, “The longer the waiting, the sweeter the kiss.” I hope that it holds true for publishing as well.
I received another rejection yesterday. This time it really hurt, as the rejection came from someone who had requested my full manuscript. I knew I shouldn’t get my hopes up and I did my best not to, but it still stung. I understand that they can’t take on every project – it’s a small press, and it’s not the easiest of times out there. You really have to love a project to take it on.
Ghost fight
Hey, look at that! I finished Chapter 10. I’ve been a busy little bee. If only lunch breaks were a little longer, I might get even more done, but at least the words are flowing fast and free. Will this be the year I win NaNoWriMo?
“Don’t make me smack you again, big brother. Just do what I tell you for once, please? If you don’t, you’re putting everyone we know and love in danger. This is the way it’s got to be, Henry. Michael is the only one who can stop what’s going to happen, but he can’t do it if you’re there with him. You’ve got to leave. Tonight.”
“And if I don’t?”
“Then we’ll be seeing each other again real soon. And this time, it won’t be a dream.”
I guess we’ll find out, won’t we?
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Chapter 9 is done and I feel fine
So I’ve finished Chapter 9 and am well into it with Chapter 10. But due to a migraine of epic proportions, my writing and computer time has been all out of whack the last couple of days. Thankfully, I’m finally feeling better. Yay! Just in time for Thanksgiving on Thursday, when I will hopefully avoid food coma but probably not football apathy.
Oh, right, you wanted a story snippet, didn’t you? How silly of me. 😀
Michael considered his father. He was not now, nor had he ever been, the most open of men. In fact, he had often wondered what his mother had seen in such a buttoned-down man, but clearly she had been privy to information to which he was not. This chink in his father’s armor had shown him a whole new side of a man he thought he knew as well as himself. He liked this new side of his father much better.
So there you go! A little insight into the Briant family. Happy Tuesday!
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The Next Big Thing…again
That’s right, I was tagged in the Next Big Thing blog hop again, this time by my good friend Sammy HK Smith. An author of many talents, she wrote about her current WIP called Anna.
Since I’ve already participated in this once with The Lokana Chronicles, and since Sammy was so kind as to tag me again, I was going to try to do it again using my current WIP, tentatively titled The Lokana Chronicles: Fog of War. Then I reread my original post. What I discovered is that a lot of the answers apply to my WIP as well as my original novel, since my WIP is a sequel. But I’m feeling procrastinatey, so here we go! 🙂
It’s that time again!
Since I had a lovely long weekend, I managed to hammer out a whole chapter in a mere afternoon. The words were flowing like the rain on Sunday and it was awesome! If only that happened every time I sat down to write. *sigh*
So, since I’ve moved on to Chapter 9 now, here’s a snippet of Chapter 8:
The forest was darker than Henry remembered. Sure, it was rainy now and then it had been a beautiful sunshiny day, but he had a feeling that this darkness had nothing at all to do with the weather. Something else was amiss, though, and for a moment, he couldn’t quite put his finger on what. But as he moved cautiously through the trees, eyes and ears alert for possible signs of danger, he finally realized what was bothering him.
It was quiet. Too quiet.
I’m really having fun writing a sequel, but it’s challenging in a lot of ways, too. I try to incorporate a bit of the first book – references to earlier people and events, for instance – but I don’t want to give away too much. On the other hand, I don’t want to be so vague that I confuse readers. It’s a fine line to walk. I hope I’m walking it well. I guess we’ll see once I’m done, won’t we?
Happy Hump Day!
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And then there were seven…
That’s right, I’ve finished Chapter 7! I plan to get a good start on Chapter 8 tomorrow, assuming I don’t have to spend all day in Convenient Care with Cricket, who seems to have a nasty eye infection thanks to a little girl at his new daycare. He seems particularly susceptible to eye infections; this isn’t the first time it’s happened. Hopefully it’ll clear up quicker than last time, though.
Anyway, here’s a snippet from Chapter 7. Happy weekend!
“Don’t worry, my dear,” Narok said, offering his arm and bestowing on Luta one of his most winning smiles as Ramila disappeared into the crowd. “I could never abandon a lady as lovely as yourself to the cruelty of solitude. Shall we take a turn about the room?”
Luta glowed under the warmth of his praise. “That is exceedingly kind of you, good sir, but surely there are others with whom you would rather spend your time?”
“Nonsense! What could be finer than the company of a beautiful woman?”
She hid her smile behind her fan, but the sound of her laughter bubbled up from behind it. “If you keep complimenting me like that, Maru Doon, I fear I may not be able to leave the room. I will have no choice but to stay here and listen to you forever.”
He laughed, though he sensed she was only half-joking. “That would not be altogether bad, would it?”
“Maru Doon, what are you talking about?” Luta’s smile faded; the mirth was now gone from her voice.
“You know your place, my dear, and I find that quality singularly pleasing in a woman, especially one of your caliber,” he said evasively. “I find that knowledge of one’s duty and one’s place in society can make an otherwise ordinary person remarkably attractive, don’t you?”
Luta nodded, desperately hoping he didn’t think her ordinary. “I am nothing, sir, if not devoted to my duties as a woman and a citizen of our great kingdom. I think you will not find me ordinary.”
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NaNo fever!
I must be out of my mind, but I’ve signed up for NaNoWriMo again this year. I skipped it last year because I didn’t have anything worth pursuing idea-wise and I was working on edits for The Lokana Chronicles like a madwoman. This year, though, I’ve decided to take the plunge.
Clearly, I am insane.
Suddenly they all died. The end. 